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ToO - action shot

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Picture for ToO.
Liked it so I gave it a background~~

Can ya tell I had fun :3

-runs off to do more-

No I don't know who she is, she's some NPC.
She belongs to ~Richi-Mikael

Edit: thanks to the awesome crit i got from :icontsaalyo: I fixed some stuff ^^
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

You might consider a different skin hue. Especially on the legs, it looks rather yellowy. So, unless the character has some kind of liver problem that induces jaundice...

Secondly, keep in mind that the elbows should be around the very bottom rib. You've out them too low on her arms, making her arms too long overall. Watch out for that next time.

Finally, on her outstretched leg, there should be more leg between the kneecap and the ankle. Notice the length of that segment on her bent leg? You got it right there.

Lineart and coloring are nice and clean, and excellent work on the shading. Personally, I would have made the eyes bigger, and angled them to give the face a little more depth. Check out some anime face tutorials for ideas. Overall though, great job.